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Homework

작성자: 박*민
2023-01-25 1051

회원님의 영작문

Have you gone to a conference on behalf of your boss? Give details of the conference; tell about how you felt.
Yes, I have attended conference instead of my boss several times. I always feel that I became an important person and trust worthy but feel nervous at the same time as I have to represent on behalf of my boss and my team.
How do you respond to customers\' queries about your company\'s products?
Normally, I receive the queries by email. So I respond to the customers by replying back with all the information as possible that are asked for.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
The conference provides an opportunity for everyone to network, exchange ideas, and present their research to the international community. The discussion on the latest innovations, achievements, trends, practical problems, and challenges they face in these areas is also encouraged. Moreover, this is a very good way to learn new things in your profession. Where many industry specialists will share their experiences to help you gain knowledge about them. This is also one of the best ways to network with other professionals in your field. ~ Teacher QUENNY.
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Have you gone to a conference on behalf of your boss? Give details of the conference; tell about how you felt.
>> Have you gone to a conference on behalf of your boss? Give details of the conference; tell about how you felt.(CORRECT) 
Yes, I have attended conference instead of my boss several times. 
>> Yes, I have attended conferences instead of my boss several times. 
I always feel that I became an important person and trust worthy but feel nervous at the same time as I have to represent on behalf of my boss and my team.
>> I always feel that I became an important and trustworthy person but feel nervous at the same time as I have to represent the company on behalf of my boss and my team.
How do you respond to customers\' queries about your company\'s products?
>> How do you respond to customers\' queries about your company\'s products?(CORRECT) 
Normally, I receive the queries by email. So I respond to the customers by replying back with all the information as possible that are asked for.
>> Normally, I receive queries by email. So I respond to the customers by replying back with all the possible information that is asked for.
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Have you gone to a conference on behalf of your boss? Give details of the conference; tell about how you felt.
Yes, I have attended conference instead of my boss several times. I always feel that I became an important person and trust worthy but feel nervous at the same time as I have to represent on behalf of my boss and my team.
How do you respond to customers\' queries about your company\'s products?
Normally, I receive the queries by email. So I respond to the customers by replying back with all the information as possible that are asked for.
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