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Which greeting kind of annoys you?

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Which greeting kind of annoys you?

To be honest, It is hard to pick some specific case to me about annoying greeting.
Because all kind of the greeting is to be welcome for me.
One thing that I might want to avoid is to face the situation that I should be welcome or say hello to someone whom I don¡¯t¡¯ want to do. I am middle of the 30 years, but until now, sometimes It is so difficult to hiding my bad feeling that I should try to pretend to be happy to meet him / her. Therefore It is the only thing that annoys me.

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We are on the same page, Angie! It is not really easy to pretend in front of a person. It is embarrassing! However, what I like about your answer is your respect towards others way of greeting.-Faith-
Which greeting kind of annoys you?
>> CORRECT
To be honest, It is hard to pick some specific case to me about annoying greeting. 
Because all kind of the greeting is to be welcome for me.
>> To be honest, it is hard to me to pick some specific cases about annoying greetings because for me all kinds of greetings are to be welcomed.
One thing that I might want to avoid is to face the situation that I should be welcome or say hello to someone whom I don¡¯t¡¯ want to do. 
>> One thing that I might want to avoid is to face a situation that I should welcome or say 'hello' to someone whom I do not want to. 
I am middle of the 30 years, but until now, sometimes It is so difficult to hiding my bad feeling 
>> I am in my middle thirties, but until now sometimes it is so difficult to hide my bad feeling.
that I should try to pretend to be happy to meet him / her. 
>> There are times that I should try to pretend to be happy to meet him or her. 
Therefore It is the only thing that annoys me.
>> Therefore, it is the only thing that annoys me.
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