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I would like to change old space heater and a little chair,table in my classroom.
Because the classroom is very cold and i don't concentrate the class.
I would like to change dirty floor and board markers.
Because my major is mordern dance. The dirty floor is not good to my foot and the dirty board markers are give to bad effect to the class.

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Happy weekend, Sae Bom! 

Thank you so much for your insight. See you next week! 

- Kristine ^^ 

I would like to change old space heater and a little chair,table in my classroom.
>> I'd like to change the old heater and the small chairs and tables in my classroom. 
Because the classroom is very cold and i don't concentrate the class.
>> My classroom is very cold and I couldn't concentrate in class. 
I would like to change dirty floor and board markers.
>> I'd also like to change the dirty floor and markers. 
Because my major is mordern dance.
>> I'm majoring modern dance.
The dirty floor is not good to my foot and the dirty board markers are give to bad effect to the class.
>> Dirty floors and markers bothers me a lot. 
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