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작성자: 박*민
2023-02-02 1299

회원님의 영작문

What will you do if you experience your account being hacked?
I will change my entire account's password first and announce all the people that my account is hacked for just in case the hacker contacts one of the person in my favorite or address list.

Do you leave confidential information in a voice mail?
No, because normally I don't really use voice mails and in case of leakage.
But sometimes I feel I have to record some conversation contents that are important to use as a proof.
For example, like when if there is a possibility that someone could change what he/she said, it's better to leave an evidence.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
Hackers illegally access devices or websites to steal people's personal information, which they use to commit the crimes like theft. The extensive use of digital devices and sharing information online can open you up to various cybersecurity dangers. Understanding how to protect yourself from these dangers is crucial. The best way to fight cybercrime is through awareness and prevention. ~ Teacher QUENNY^^
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What will you do if you experience your account being hacked?
>> What will you do if you experience your account being hacked? (CORRECT) 
I will change my entire account's password first and announce all the people that my account is hacked for just in case the hacker contacts one of the person in my favorite or address list.
>> I will change my entire account's password first and announce to all the people that my account is hacked just in case the hacker contacts one of the people in my favorite or address list.
Do you leave confidential information in a voice mail?
>>Do you leave confidential information in a voicemail?
No, because normally I don't really use voice mails and in case of leakage.
>> No, because normally I don't really use voicemail in case of leakage.
But sometimes I feel I have to record some conversation contents that are important to use as a proof.
>>But sometimes I feel I have to record some conversation contents that are important to use as proof.
For example, like when if there is a possibility that someone could change what he/she said, it's better to leave an evidence. 
>> For example, when there is a possibility that someone could change what he/she said, it's better to leave a piece of evidence. 
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What will you do if you experience your account being hacked?
I will change my entire account's password first and announce all the people that my account is hacked for just in case the hacker contacts one of the person in my favorite or address list.

Do you leave confidential information in a voice mail?
No, because normally I don't really use voice mails and in case of leakage.
But sometimes I feel I have to record some conversation contents that are important to use as a proof.
For example, like when if there is a possibility that someone could change what he/she said, it's better to leave an evidence.











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