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Why do you think it\'s difficult for people to talk about suicide?

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It's because the topic for talking is little bit uncomfortable and if I start to talk about it, many people will not talk with me anymore because of my negative thought. And many people think about suicide because of their toughness of life. But they don't talk about it.
I think if we don't go over our manner line, talking about our toughness of life and get a consolation each other.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^^
Thank you for answering this question. I think it's hard to talk about suicide because of the stigma that goes with it. 
I hope you're doing great. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

It's because the topic for talking is little bit uncomfortable and if I start to talk about it, many people will not talk with me anymore because of my negative thought. 
>> It's because the topic is a little uncomfortable and if I start to talk about it, many people will not talk with me anymore because of my negative thought.
And many people think about suicide because of their toughness of life. 
>> In addition, many people think about suicide because of the toughness in their lives.
But they don't talk about it.
>> CORRECT!
I think if we don't go over our manner line, talking about our toughness of life and get a consolation each other.
>> [Do you mean]: I think if we reflect of our situation and talk about our difficulties in life, we may get consolation from each other.
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