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What do you miss most when you are traveling?

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What I miss most when I was traveling is food.
Actually most of Korean foods are not oily. Even alomost western restaurants in Korea serve Kimchi.
So whenever I visited big cities like Rio or Buenos-aires, I used to look for Korean super markets to but kimchi or ramens.
What I am curious of is that I don't feel like to eat kimchi just after I arrived at Korea.
So I think that this was caused from my anxiety that I was so far from my home.

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Hi, Ian
Yes, I actually watched a Korean variety show where they traveled to another country and in that show, they were really craving kimchi. I think craving food from your country is normal when you travel because it gives you a sense of comfort.
-T. Caitlyn
What I miss most when I was traveling is food.
>>What I miss most when I am traveling is the food.
Actually most of Korean foods are not oily.
>>Actually, most Korean foods are not oily.
Even alomost western restaurants in Korea serve Kimchi.
>> Almost all western restaurants in Korea even serve kimchi 
So whenever I visited big cities like Rio or Buenos-aires, I used to look for Korean super markets to but kimchi or ramens.
>> Whenever I visit big cities like Rio or Buenos-aires, I look for Korean supermarkets to buy kimchi or ramen.
What I am curious of is that I don't feel like to eat kimchi just after I arrived at Korea.
>> What I am wondering about is why I don't feel like eating kimchi just after I arrived in Korea.
So I think that this was caused from my anxiety that I was so far from my home.
>> I think that this was just caused by my anxiety from being far from home.
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