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Please describe your favorite restaurant.

작성자: 박*정
2023-02-07 1076

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Homework #3_2023-02-07
WRITING TASK: Please describe your favorite restaurant.

When I chose the restaurant, the atmosphere is one of the favorite thing for me to go to. And the other thing is with whom I go to.
I am not tricky person to eat something so If my company want to eat or to go something, I will mostly follow him or her.
One of my favorite restaurants here is some Italian restaurant near the Han-River.
We went there when we hung out before getting marriage and after giving the birth, I did dated with my husband again. It is pretty small space but, every time many people crowded. Actually, I am hesitate to eating some noisy place, but, its dishes were really good to me, so it is worth to choosing there. I think, the good memories there made me more comfortable and want to go there again.

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Apparently, you have special and memorable experiences there, Angie! Thank you for sharing it with me.-Faith-
When I chose the restaurant, the atmosphere is one of the favorite thing for me to go to. 
>> When I choose a restaurant, the atmosphere is one of the favorite things for me to go.
OR When I choose a restaurant, one of my considerations is the atmosphere.
And the other thing is with whom I go to.
>> Also, the other thing is with whom I go with.
I am not tricky person to eat something so If my company want to eat or to go something, I will mostly follow him or her.
>> I am not a picky person, so if my company wanted to eat or to go somewhere, I would mostly follow him or her.
One of my favorite restaurants here is some Italian restaurant near the Han-River.
>> One of my favorite restaurants here is some Italian restaurants near Han River.
We went there when we hung out before getting marriage and after giving the birth, I did dated with my husband again. 
>> My husband and I went there when we hung out before getting married and after I gave birth, I did date with my husband again there. 
It is pretty small space but, every time many people crowded. 
>> It is a pretty small space, but it is always crowded. 
OR It has a limited space, so it is jampacked all the time.
Actually, I am hesitate to eating some noisy place, but, its dishes were really good to me, so it is worth to choosing there. 
>> Actually, I hesitate to eat at some noisy places, but its dishes are really good to me, so it is worth it choosing that place.
I think, the good memories there made me more comfortable and want to go there again.
>> The good memories there make me more comfortable and want me to go there again and again.
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