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Q1. What do you prefer online or offline shopping?

A1. I prefer offline shopping because the goods are more accurate.

Q2. Which one is better online or offline shopping?

A2. It depends on the case. If it's hard to go out, online shopping is better. Or else, offline shopping is better.

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Hi Geonha, 
Going from one shop or one aisle to another can be exhausting and time-consuming. You could spend hours roaming around looking for something. There are also times, especially on payday when malls and groceries get crowded when you can barely walk or navigate your cart. While online shopping customers can purchase items from the comfort of their own homes or workplace. Shopping is made easier and convenient for the customer through the internet. It is also easy to cancel transactions. Saves time and effort. ~ Teacher QUENNY. 
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Q1. What do you prefer online or offline shopping?
>> Do you prefer online or offline shopping?
A1. I prefer offline shopping because the goods are more accurate.
 >> I prefer offline shopping because the goods are more accurate and I can fit the product before buying it. 
Q2. Which one is better online or offline shopping?
>> Which one is better online or offline shopping? (CORRECT) 
A2. It depends on the case. If it's hard to go out, online shopping is better. Or else, offline shopping is better.
>> It depends on the situation. If it's hard to go out online shopping is better. Or else, offline shopping is better when you want to go around the mall and see many things.
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Q1. What do you prefer online or offline shopping?

A1. I prefer offline shopping because the goods are more accurate.

Q2. Which one is better online or offline shopping?

A2. It depends on the case. If it's hard to go out, online shopping is better. Or else, offline shopping is better.
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