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I think there is not easy way in learning english.
So every day I should listen english, say in english, think by english.
I think it will be lucky if I make a english friend.

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Hello, Mr. Son. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. I appreciate the efforts you are making in learning English and I have to agree with you that there is no easy way to learn English. In short, you have to breathe and live English every day if you want to learn quickly ^^ but you still have to take it easy. Learning English is supposed to be fun and enjoyable. I hope you are having fun while learning English. Have a good night. See you in our next class. ~Jane c",) 


I think there is not easy way in learning English. 
>> I think there is no easy way in learning English. 

So every day I should listen english, say in english, think by english. 
>> So every day I should listen to English, speak in English, and think in English. 

I think it will be lucky if I make a english friend. 
>> I think I will be lucky if I make an English friend. 
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