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The 'china town' is famous in my city.
And there are many chines in live there.
The black noodle is famous food in the 'china town'.
I really love this food.

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Hello there, Sae Bom! 

We also have Chinatown in the Philippines. I've heard, Manila's Chinatown, is the oldest of its kind in the world. They were filled with grocers, restaurants, laundries, and other small businesses. Most importantly, these early Chinatowns served as a vital social and economic support network for Chinese laborers facing discrimination, while also serving as a secondary home.

- Kristine ^^ 

The 'china town' is famous in my city.
>> Chinatown is the most famous tourist attraction in my city. 
And there are many chines in live there.
>> There are many Chinese living there. 
The black noodle is famous food in the 'china town'.
>> The most famous food in Chinatwon is black noodles.
I really love this food.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I enjoy eaating this dish. 

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