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Which country would you NOT like to visit? Why?

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I wouldn't like to visit india. I watched a lot of travel Vlog in Yutube. So I leaned about a lot of country.
Among them, After I watched india video, I was surprised. There are not sanitary and look very dangerous. The street also look chaos.
A lot of dust and cow make me shoked. Anyway, the last thing I want to do is visit india.

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Hi there, Kevin!
You know what, I had the same thought as you but there are few exceptions ^^
I heard from a friend who visited India that the countryside in India is really wonderful but of course, you have to look after your safety so you must travel in groups and go to legit travel agencies that provide affordable and trusted tour guides:)
Enjoy roaming the world if you have a chance.
T. Aki~

I wouldn't like to visit india. I watched a lot of travel Vlog in Yutube. So I leaned about a lot of country.
>>> I wouldn't like to visit India. I watched a lot of travel vlogs on YouTube. So I leaned about a lot of countries.

Among them, After I watched india video, I was surprised. There are not sanitary and look very dangerous. The street also look chaos.
>>> Among them, After I watched the India video, I was surprised. They are not sanitary and look very dangerous. The street also looks chaotic.

A lot of dust and cow makes me shocked. Anyway, the last thing I want to do is visit India.
>>> There are a lot of dust and the cows everywhere make me shocked. Anyway, the last thing I want to do is visit India
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