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WRITING TASK: Do you think the type of vacation one takes reflects one's social status? Please explain your answer.

It is a pretty difficult question. I think there is not depended on social status. This days, most young generation can spend their money to take a great vacation to release their breath in their life. They think it is worth to taking a good time in good place. Moreover, many people share the various and good information about their personal vacation with social media. Therefore, It is much more easy to choose the good place with not expensive cost.

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I totally agree with you, Angie. It is the best way to maintain work-life balance. Take care!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: Do you think the type of vacation one takes reflects one's social status? Please explain your answer.
>> CORRECT
It is a pretty difficult question. 
>> CORRECT
I think there is not depended on social status. 
>> I think that does not depend on social status. 
This days, most young generation can spend their money to take a great vacation to release their breath in their life. 
>> These days, most young generations can spend their money to take a great vacation to release their stress in life. 
They think it is worth to taking a good time in good place. 
>> They think it is worth taking a good time in a good place. 
Moreover, many people share the various and good information about their personal vacation with social media. 
>> Moreover, many people share various and good information about their personal vacation on social media. 
Therefore, It is much more easy to choose the good place with not expensive cost.
>> Therefore, it is much easier to choose a good but inexpensive place.
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