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Exam stress affects me as a student making it difficult for me to focus more on my studies. It is a exam to check if I have studied and understood the contents, but students think only the results of the exam are so important that they do not want to study. And test stress negatively affects students. Because if I do poorly on an exam, I may have to rethink my career path.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Exam stress affects me as a student making it difficult for me to focus more on my studies. 
>>> CORRECT!

It is a exam to check if I have studied and understood the contents, but students think only the results of the exam are so important that they do not want to study. 
>>> It is an exam to check if I have studied and understood the contents, but students think only the results of the exam are so important that they do not want to study. 

And test stress negatively affects students. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because if I do poorly on an exam, I may have to rethink my career path.
>>> CORRECT!
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