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Why are long-term goals important?

작성자: 류*선
2023-02-15 1311

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Because I can know the meaning of struggling with concerns that I have here and now. In my case, the long-term goal makes my not hurry to live. Because it's a long journey. I have to dedicate my energy and time to family and church now. Sometimes Even though I know it is meant a lot, I'm tired. When I'm exhausted from my circumstances, I try to think about my goals for the future. And I pray to God who has pity on me. While I'm praying, I can realize God's heart and grace. My all circumstances also are God's plan and hope here and now. I have to see God's grace in my recent life. I don't need to hurry to see it in the future. I believe God can build up in the weak. When I'm weak and poor, I want to be more grateful to God. Now is the time. I am sure that the present time will be a testimony. God is making my future through my spiritual discipline now. There is no wasted time in my life. I just have to go with Him step by step. I think this is my best. So I'm happy. Thank you, Faith! :)

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I am glad that you are able to realize your purpose and goals today and tomorrow, Jane! That is awesome!-Faith-
Because I can know the meaning of struggling with concerns that I have here and now. 
>> Long-term goals are important because I can know the meaning of my struggles with concerns that I have here and now. 
In my case, the long-term goal makes my not hurry to live. Because it's a long journey. 
>> In my case, the long-term goal makes me not to be in a hurry in life because it is a long journey. 
I have to dedicate my energy and time to family and church now. 
>> I have to dedicate my energy and time to my family and church now. 
Sometimes Even though I know it is meant a lot, I'm tired. 
>> Sometimes even though I know it means a lot, I am tired. 
When I'm exhausted from my circumstances, I try to think about my goals for the future. 
>> When I am exhausted from my circumstances, I try to think about my goals for the future. 
And I pray to God who has pity on me. 
>> Also, I pray to God who has pity on me. 
While I'm praying, I can realize God's heart and grace. 
>> While I am praying, I can realize God's heart and grace. 
My all circumstances also are God's plan and hope here and now. 
>> All of my circumstances also are God's plan and hope here and now. 
I have to see God's grace in my recent life. 
>> CORRECT
I don't need to hurry to see it in the future. 
>> CORRECT
I believe God can build up in the weak. 
>> I believe God can build up with the weak. 
When I'm weak and poor, I want to be more grateful to God. 
>> CORRECT
Now is the time. 
>> CORRECT
I am sure that the present time will be a testimony. 
>> CORRECT
God is making my future through my spiritual discipline now. 
>> CORRECT
There is no wasted time in my life. 
>> CORRECT
I just have to go with Him step by step. 
>> CORRECT
OR I just have to walk with him.
I think this is my best. So I'm happy. 
>> I think this is my best, so I am happy. 
Thank you, Faith! :)
>> CORRECT
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