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Homework from the Feedback (15)

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Q1. How could you make someone accept your request?

A1. I don't make someone accept my request. I think it depends on the person who has to make a decision.

Q2. How do you feel when someone rejects you?

A2. I don't express it, but I feel upset when someone rejects my request.

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Hi Geonha, 
Recognize that rejection is a part of life. Some things aren't meant to be and accept what happened. The worst way to cope with rejection is to deny it and the best way is we need to treat ourselves with compassion and don't allow rejection to define us. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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Q1. How could you make someone accept your request?
>>  How could you make someone accept your request? (CORRECT)
A1. I don't make someone accept my request. I think it depends on the person who has to make a decision.
>>A1. I don't persuade someone to accept my request. I think it depends on the person who has to make a decision.
Q2. How do you feel when someone rejects you?
>>How do you feel when someone rejects you? (CORRECT) 
A2. I don't express it, but I feel upset when someone rejects my request. (CORRECT)
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Q1. How could you make someone accept your request?

A1. I don't make someone accept my request. I think it depends on the person who has to make a decision.

Q2. How do you feel when someone rejects you?

A2. I don't express it, but I feel upset when someone rejects my request
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