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Hi, there.
You know what?
I couldn't help but have my whiskey time today.
I had a hectic day.
This afternoon, there was a big problem with our new building's internet.
In fact, I contracted the company about our internet around two months ago.
And the staff of the company promised me that he could build an internet network perfectly soon.
Can you guess what happened?
As you know that, we have only one week to start our business in the new clinic.
The staff said, "Don't worry, I can build the network next week."
Of course, I doubted him, so I requested the phone number of outdoor manager of the company.
I hardly received the number(because that staff didn't want to give me the number) and called the manager.
And then, I realized that they couldn't build the network because of the limitation of our new building structure.
I literally got mad.
And I decided to change the company at once.
I don't believe if some irresponsible men told something repeatedly.
Good night.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good morning, Dr. Kim!

Yur whiskey is your bestfriend. You have to be kind to each other. You should not abuse drinking it, at the same time, it needs to be there for you all the time. The good news is, the whiskey deos not speak unlike a real bestfriend that judges you of what you do or suggests something you do not even want to do. So, here's an early toast for you and your whiskey tonight- cheers! ^^

As we have talked about  in class, there are other people who do not have the sense of ownership for the companies they work for and they love wasting other people's precious time. They can be very unprofessional and they pull the business down. If they were the owners of the company, they will never do that thing. So, somtimes, knowing the owner of the company is a good thing. I hope that your Internet connection will be installed before the week ends. I watched a drama yesterday that said, "Only the people you trust can disappoint you." This is true. However, we should trust people to accomplish things. We just need to be careful f who we trust.

Your composition is as great as you speak. Take note os sentence #10 and the two ways to use "as you know' and 'you know that'. For the rest are the simple use of 'the'. So thank you for your enthusiasm and  consistent excellence!

See you tomorrow! 

-T. Donna~

Hi, there.
>> Correct!

You know what?
>> Correct!

I couldn't help but have my whiskey time today.
>> Correct!

I had a hectic day.
>> Correct!

This afternoon, there was a big problem with our new building's internet.
>> Correct!
Or: Internet

In fact, I contracted the company about our internet around two months ago.
>> Correct!
Or: In fact, I made a contract with a company about our internet around two months ago.

And the staff of the company promised me that he could build an internet network perfectly soon.
>> Correct!

Can you guess what happened?
>> Correct!

As you know that, we have only one week to start our business in the new clinic.
>> As you know, we have only one week to start our business in the new clinic.
Or: You know that we have only one week to start our business in the new clinic.

The staff said, "Don't worry, I can build the network next week."
>> Correct!

Of course, I doubted him, so I requested the phone number of outdoor manager of the company.
>> Of course, I doubted him, so I requested the phone number of the outdoor manager of the company.

I hardly received the number(because that staff didn't want to give me the number) and called the manager.
>> Correct!

And then, I realized that they couldn't build the network because of the limitation of our new building structure.
>> Correct!

I literally got mad.
>> Correct!

And I decided to change the company at once.
>> Correct!

I don't believe if some irresponsible men told something repeatedly.
>> Correct!

Good night.
>> Correct!
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