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Do you like animated movies? Are they only for kids?

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No I don't think so.
These days, many animated movies are suitable for adults than kids.
For example, "The inside out" by Pixar said about growing of child and human.
it's expressed animated movie, but it's story for adults.

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No I don't think so.
>> Correct
These days, many animated movies are suitable for adults than kids.
>> Correct
For example, "The inside out" by Pixar said about growing of child and human.
>> For example, "The inside Out" by Pixar talks about the growth of a child and human.
it's expressed animated movie, but it's story for adults.
>> It is an animated movie but the story is for adults.
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