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작성자: 윤*혜
2023-02-24 1911

회원님의 영작문

1. my sister and i were arguing angrily last night.
2. Do you ever support one against another if your children are fighting?
3. Is doing wrong in return with someone who's done the wrong thing to you a good idea?
4. I've tried to be less violent with Jenny, but she's still too angry with me.
5. After drinking too much, Jimmy was tried of fighting.
6. Neighbors who've been fighting for years find it hard to recall their past conflicts.
7. Those countries have been closely co-operating for many years.
8. If the conflict is allowed to continue much longer, war is possible.
9. Revealing the president's past crimes has caused much trouble.
10. If you get into an argument about politics, she'll probably lose the argument.
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강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Da Hye,


Thank you for answering your homework!

Understanding what you hear is much easier when you know common English phrases. These expressions are frequently employed. You'll hear them used a lot if you keep your ears open and pay close attention. You'll have no trouble understanding spoken English once you learn more phrases.

~Teacher Cathy

         


1. my sister and i were arguing angrily last night.

>>My sister and I were arguing angrily last night.

2. Do you ever support one against another if your children are fighting?

>>CORRECT

3. Is doing wrong in return with someone who's done the wrong thing to you a good idea?

>>CORRECT

4. I've tried to be less violent with Jenny, but she's still too angry with me.

>>I've tried to end the dispute with Jenny, but she's still too angry with me.

5. After drinking too much, Jimmy was tried of fighting.

>>After drinking too much, Jimmy was wanting to fight.

6. Neighbors who've been fighting for years find it hard to recall their past conflicts.

>>Neighbors who've been fighting for years find it hard to forget their past conflicts

7. Those countries have been closely co-operating for many years.

>>Those countries have been strongly disagreeing for many years.

8. If the conflict is allowed to continue much longer, war is possible.

>>If the conflict is allowed to suddenly get worse, war is possible.

9. Revealing the president's past crimes has caused much trouble.

>>CORRECT

10. If you get into an argument about politics, she'll probably lose the argument.

>>If you get into an argument about politics, she'll probably win the argument.

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