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Is the desert a dangerous place?
yes. Deserts are dangerous.

Why do you think so?
In the desert, there is no water necessary for life, and the roads are almost the same and it is hot, so it seems dangerous to me.

What animals live in the desert?
There are probably many animals that can live without drinking water.

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Good day, Sharon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Is the desert a dangerous place?
yes. Deserts are dangerous.
>> Yes, deserts are dangerous.

Why do you think so?
In the desert, there is no water necessary for life, and the roads are almost the same and it is hot, so it seems dangerous to me.
>> CORRECT!

What animals live in the desert?
There are probably many animals that can live without drinking water.
>> CORRECT!

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