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작성자: 박*민
2023-02-27 1218

회원님의 영작문

How do you deal with major changes in your company?
For predictable situations, our company refers to the market statistical data or sales forecast as much as possible to cope with the situation in advance.
How do you enjoy good weather with your colleagues?
We go out for lunch together and drink coffee where we can sit outside and enjoy good weather. There are several nice places near by our company where is located on the roof top or outdoors.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
Change in the workplace can be overwhelming and challenging to manage. So, we need to maintain a positive attitude. Regardless of the new situation, it is always important to be optimistic and maintain a good attitude at work. Have an open mind and make change work for you. Rework your goals and set out to achieve them. And communication is key.
To enjoy the good weather outside while at work. Allow yourself to take a break from what you are doing, and place yourself in a different surrounding. Remove yourself from your work. This will provide you with a better perspective when you return to your work. ~ Teacher QUENNY


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How do you deal with major changes in your company?
>>How do you deal with major changes in your company?(CORRECT) 
For predictable situations, our company refers to the market statistical data or sales forecast as much as possible to cope with the situation in advance.
>>For predictable situations, our company refers to the market statistical data or sales forecast as much as possible to cope with the situation in advance.(CORRECT) 
How do you enjoy good weather with your colleagues?
>> How do you enjoy good weather with your colleagues? (CORRECT) 
We go out for lunch together and drink coffee where we can sit outside and enjoy good weather. There are several nice places near by our company where is located on the roof top or outdoors.
>> We go out for lunch together and drink coffee where we can sit outside and enjoy the good weather. There are several nice places near our company that are located on the rooftop or outdoors.
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How do you deal with major changes in your company?
For predictable situations, our company refers to the market statistical data or sales forecast as much as possible to cope with the situation in advance.
How do you enjoy good weather with your colleagues?
We go out for lunch together and drink coffee where we can sit outside and enjoy good weather. There are several nice places near by our company where is located on the roof top or outdoors.
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