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It doesn't matter whether the record of school violence remain for two years or forever.

We should focus on reducing bullying and violence.

Unfortunately even though new policies were made several times, school bullying continue ti increase until now.

The reasons are aduly's corrupted morality and success oriented values in Korea.

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Hello Ms. Lily!
I like you thought here. The knowledge of an educator is different from a politician.
Thank you for this. See you later!
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It doesn't matter whether the record of school violence remains for two years or forever.
>>> CORRECT!

We should focus on reducing bullying and violence.
>>> CORRECT!

Unfortunately, even though new policies were made several times, school bullying continues to increase until now.
>>> CORRECT!

The reasons are adults' corrupted morality and success-oriented values in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
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