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When it comes to a balanced diet, no matter how healthy the food is, a one-sided diet may eventually be bad for the person. As you know, our body needs various nutrients to work well. If we lack particular nutrients, our body may malfunction despite abundant other good nutrients. However, it's desirable and recommended that you drink additional nutrients while keeping a balanced diet, for example, to build up your body.

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  Some people drink protein shakes or eat any other kind of food related to working out.  Is this a good idea? Why or why not?


When it comes to a balanced diet, no matter how healthy the food is, a one-sided diet may eventually be bad for the person. 
>> OR: As far as dieting is concerned, the kind of healthy food one takes makes no difference if the diet is not well-balanced. 

As you know, our body needs various nutrients to work well.  
>> OR: It goes without saying that a balanced and healthy diet supplies the fuel your body need to work effectively. 
>> OR:  Needless to say, a balanced diet makes sure that your body functions at its best. 

If we lack particular nutrients, our body may malfunction despite abundant other good nutrients. 
>> OR: Without balanced nutrition, our body is more prone to illnesses, notwithstanding the presence of abundant other good nutrients. 

However, it's desirable and recommended that you drink additional nutrients while keeping a balanced diet, for example, to build up your body.
>> OR: That being said, experts recommend that even after consuming additional support, such as protein powders or protein bars to feul muscle growth, we still need to enure we're eating a healthy and varied range of foods. 

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