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I'm the most important person in my life

And my family

I think When I'm happy My family is happy

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I'm the most important person in my life And my family
>> I can consider myself and my family the most important person in my life.
I think When I'm happy My family is happy and when my family is happy I'm happy
>> Whenever I'm happy, my family is also happy and vice versa.
So I want to be happy myself and ourselves
>> So, I want all of us to be happy.
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