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I'm the most important person in my life

And my family

I think When I'm happy My family is happy

and when my family is happy I'm happy

So I want to be happy myself and ourselves

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Happy Monday to you, Kay! Education is the most powerful weapon, which you can use to change the world. Great things are done by a series of small things brought together. You get the best out of others when you give the best of yourself. 
 
I'm the most important person in my life And my family
>> I can consider myself and my family the most important person in my life.
I think When I'm happy My family is happy and when my family is happy I'm happy
>> Whenever I'm happy, my family is also happy and vice versa.
So I want to be happy myself and ourselves
>> So, I want all of us to be happy.
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