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I want to recommend a waterproof coat and pants.
Because the waterproof clothes keep cold from snow.
Inaddition I want to recommend the goggles and beanie.
Because the goggles can front view.
And the beanie keep your head warmer.

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Hey Sae Bom! 

Dressing for the weather helps keep your neck, head and face warm. Warm clothes can help prevent hypothermia. When discussing how to dress for the weather, it's important to mention the need for a good pair of boots. One of the best ways to prevent a fall is buying a quality pair of boots.

- Kristine ^^ 

I want to recommend a waterproof coat and pants.
>> I want to recommend a waterproof coat and pants.
Because the waterproof clothes keep cold from snow.
>> Because waterproof clothing can protect us from the cold.
Inaddition I want to recommend the goggles and beanie.
>> Furthermore, I want to recommend the beanie and goggles.
Because the goggles can front view.
>> You can see the front by wearing goggles.
And the beanie keep your head warmer.
>> Moreover, beanie keeps your head warm.
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