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I brushing my teeth 2 times in a day
Brushing teeth is important because may my teeth rot that i can feel painful

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Hi Henry, 
 Brushing our teeth is an important way to keep our teeth and gums clean, healthy, and free from oral disease. And regular toothbrushing helps to prevent tooth decay and gum disease by reducing the number of bacteria and plaque around your teeth and gums. ~ Teacher QUENNY

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I brushing my teeth 2 times in a day
>>I brush my teeth twice a day. 
Brushing teeth is important because may my teeth rot that i can feel painful
>> It's necessary to brush my teeth because I will have tooth decay and it's painful. 
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