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my nomal life is always make me smile!
just talk with my family and tell a joke, make them smile.

some times go to the out side with my friends, and drink the alcoholic whit them.
if we don't drink alcohol, just talk some they's life, something jokes, play the game

my life is not special and interesting, but it is make me happy always.
i love my life because i love people around me

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Hi Da Hye,

I¡¯m glad you¡¯re happy and getting love and satisfaction from your friends and family. Receiving love and affection has numerous positive mental, emotional, and social effects. In addition to assisting you in maintaining a beneficial relationship that lasts for a long time, it also significantly boosts your self-confidence and self-esteem. You and your loved one can bond more deeply and gain more trust.

~Teacher Cathy

 

my nomal life is always make me smile!

My everyday life always makes me smile!

just talk with my family and tell a joke, make them smile.

Just talking with my family and telling jokes makes them smile.

some times go to the out side with my friends, and drink the alcoholic whit them.

Sometimes I go outside with my friends and drink alcohol with them.

if we don't drink alcohol, just talk some they's life, something jokes, play the game

If we don't drink alcohol, we talk about their lives, sometimes joke about it, and play games.

my life is not special and interesting, but it is make me happy always.

My life is not special and interesting, but it makes me happy always.

i love my life because i love people around me

I love my life because I love the people around me.

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