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1. I dislike go to the movies by myself.
2. We want to eat dinner in a fancy restaurant.
3. I can't buy my own house in Korea.
4. I used to watch that television show all the time.
5. I always eat breakfast before go to school.
6. Where do you play the piano?
7. My grandmother readnig science fiction books.
8. My teacher said my essay needs to correct.
9. I want to see if she is in a bad mood.
10. Our neighbour smokes cigarrette.

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Hi! thank you for taking the time to work on your homework. ^_^ You did well.
T. Irene
1. I dislike go to the movies by myself.
>>> I dislike going to the movies by myself.
2. We want to eat dinner in a fancy restaurant.
>>> Correct. 
3. I can't buy my own house in Korea.
>>> Correct. 
4. I used to watch that television show all the time.
>>> Correct. 
5. I always eat breakfast before go to school.
>>>  I always eat breakfast before going to school.
6. Where do you play the piano?
>>> Correct. 
7. My grandmother readnig science fiction books.
>>> My grandmother reads science fiction books.
8. My teacher said my essay needs to correct.
>>>  My teacher said my essay needs correcting.
9. I want to see if she is in a bad mood.
>>> Correct. 
10. Our neighbour smokes cigarrette.
>>> Correct.  





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