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How can ADHD affect a person¡¯s activities of daily living and quality of life?

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I saw an article on a website. On the article, An adult man had made mistakes very often, but the man could know, why he did.It happens at his work. He got lots of punishments because of that mistakes. He lost confidence, and It ruined his life. On day. He decided to see a doctor. The doctor said, he had ADHD. He took some medicine. After that, he could overcome. So, I think that ADHD can ruin one's life.

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Kelly! 

ADHD can have a significant social impact on affected individuals' lives, causing disruption at school, work, and in relationships. Symptoms of ADHD may also be associated with increased risk-taking behaviour.

Kristine ^^ 

I saw an article on a website. 
>> I came across an article online.
On the article, An adult man had made mistakes very often, but the man could know, why he did.
>> According to the article, an adult man frequently made mistakes, but he wasn't aware of it. 
It happens at his work. 
>> It happened at work. 
He got lots of punishments because of that mistakes. 
>> He received numerous punishments as a result of his errors.
He lost confidence, and It ruined his life. 
>> His life was shattered and lost his confidence.
On day. He decided to see a doctor. 
>> One day, he decided to see a doctor.
The doctor said, he had ADHD. 
>> The doctor said he has ADHD. 
He took some medicine. After that, he could overcome. 
>> He took some medication then eventually he got better. 
So, I think that ADHD can ruin one's life.
>> In my opinion, ADHD can ruin a person's life.
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