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Q: How would the world change if weekends were three days long?
A: I think the world will develop slower if weekends were three days.
Most people work except weekends, and the works they do develops the world, so the world would develop slower than before.
But people could rest a lot if the weekends were three days.

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Happy Friday, Paul! I am happy to read your homework. You're doing a great job. Please keep it up! ^^
~T. ELEA

A: I think the world will develop slower if weekends were three days.
Most people work except weekends, and the works they do develops the world, so the world would develop slower than before.
But people could rest a lot if the weekends were three days.
>>I think the world will develop slower if weekends were three days.
Most people work except on weekends, and the work they do develops the world, so the world would develop slower than before.
But people could rest a lot if the weekends were three days.
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