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If you had to lose one of your senses (sight, smell, hearing, touch, taste) which would you rather l

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I will lost my sense of smell. It's because it looks easier way. If I lose my sight, I can see the very beautiful scenery of nature and the other things. And if I lost hearing, I can't listen my favorite songs or my favorite singer's new songs. If I lost my sense of touch, I can't feel anything like something smooth or my hand's skin. At last, if I lost my sense of taste, I can't feel delicious food's taste. It is very painful to bear it and I will lost the happiness of eating.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^_^
It's Monday again. Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. 
It is indeed hard to lose our senses because they all play an important role in our lives to keep us safe and make like more pleasurable and worth-living. 
I can't imagine losing any of them. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great. 
See you in class later. ^^
~ Teacher Charry

I will lost my sense of smell. 
>> I will choose to lose my sense of smell. 
It's because it looks easier way. 
>> It's because it looks like an easier way. 
If I lose my sight, I can see the very beautiful scenery of nature and the other things. 
>> If I lose my sight, I can't see the very beautiful scenery of nature and the other things. 
And if I lost hearing, I can't listen my favorite songs or my favorite singer's new songs. 
>> If I lose my hearing, I can't listen to my favorite songs or my favorite singer's new songs. 
If I lost my sense of touch, I can't feel anything like something smooth or my hand's skin. 
>> If I lose my sense of touch, I can't feel anything like something smooth or even my hand's skin. 
At last, if I lost my sense of taste, I can't feel delicious food's taste. 
>> Lastly, if I lose my sense of taste, I can't feel the delicious food's taste. 
It is very painful to bear it and I will lost the happiness of eating.
>> It is very painful to bear it and I will lose the happiness from eating.
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