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Because the people that attend a music concert can feel relaxing and mental peaceful.
Besides, the perfect orchestra gives amazing performance to me.

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Happy Monday, Sae Bom!

Music fanatics all over the world desperately await the opportunity for attending live music concerts all year round. While it is one thing to sit at home listening to your favorite music or watching TV or streaming videos on YouTube, but being in the crowd, packed out in a stadium, or detached from the real world on an underground dance floor, that is what takes things to another level.

- Kristine ^^ 

Because the people that attend a music concert can feel relaxing and mental peaceful.
>> As those who attend musical concerts can unwind and feel at peace.
Besides, the perfect orchestra gives amazing performance to me.
>> I am also amazed by the orchestra performance.
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