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Which country\'s food do you like the most? Why?

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2023-03-14 1613

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I like the Korean Food because I can't eat greasy food like butter bread, cream pasta, egg tarte well.
I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi food and something else.
When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I can't eat over 5 days.
Because the Japanese cusine is a little bit salty and greasy. And then I went to Hongkong, their food was
greasy and spicy. Hongkong food didn't match with my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and alcohol
for dinner. I just ate Hongkong food for lunch. But maybe I can eat all countries' food if they are not greasy.
I even don't eat a cake on my birthday. So it is exactly right that I just like food which isn't greasy
no matter what does it come from.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Gem!
Reading your writing made me hungry (haha)! I learned something new about you today - you don't like greasy food. We are very similar in that aspect. Thanks for your time and effort in writing. See you in our next class!
~~Teacher Kate 

I like the Korean Food because I can't eat greasy food like butter bread, cream pasta, egg tarte well.
>>I like Korean food because I can't eat greasy food like buttered bread, cream pasta, and egg tart well.
I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi food and something else.
>>I usually eat red food like tteokbokki, kimchi dishes and something else.
When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I can't eat over 5 days.
>>When I went to Japan, their food was delicious for 4-5 days but I think I couldn't eat more beyond those 5 days.
Because the Japanese cusine is a little bit salty and greasy. 
>>It's because Japanese cuisine is a little bit salty and greasy. 
And then I went to Hongkong, their food was greasy and spicy. 
>>CORRECT!
Hongkong food didn't match with my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and alcohol for dinner. 
>>Hongkong food didn't match my taste, so I usually ate brunch in the morning and drank alcohol for dinner. 
I just ate Hongkong food for lunch. 
>>CORRECT!
But maybe I can eat all countries' food if they are not greasy.
>>CORRECT!
I even don't eat a cake on my birthday. 
>>I don't even eat cake on my birthday. 
So it is exactly right that I just like food which isn't greasy no matter what does it come from.
>>So it is safe to say that I just like food which aren't greasy no matter where it comes from.
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