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How much nature is there where you live?

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There is park with lake near my house.
This park is little big.
Sometimes, there are some show or performance in the park, like laser show and fountain show with music.

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Hi JT!
You are lucky to live near that park with lake. You don't need to go far if you want to be with nature.
~Kelly
There is park with lake near my house.
>> There is a park with lake near my house.
This park is little big.
>> This park is a little big.
Sometimes, there are some show or performance in the park, like laser show and fountain show with music.
>> Sometimes, there are some shows or performances in the park, like a laser show and a fountain show with music.
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