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A story that i missed the deadline.

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2023-03-28 1976

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The deadline means the time when we have to finish our work, project or assignment.
I was accustomed to use the word, "deadline", without thinking. But doing homework, i realize that "deadline" is the compound word which is "dead" + "line". It was kind of creepy word for me.

I'm usually good at meeting the deadline when i have a project but there is one story i missed the deadline.
When i worked co-worker asked me to finish the project by this week. However, I totally forgot about it so he asked me "Are you done? when can i get the project you did?" at times, I remembered that. I didn't tell him that i forgot about it instead i tried to do the project quickly and roughly. Anyway, I gave it to him on Friday evening so i thought i escape the danger of missing the deadline.

However, next Monday, he told me you need to do it again. He probably noticed that i forgot the deadline and i finished the work quickly done.

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Hi Ellen, 
Deadlines help us to collaborate toward achieving a shared goal, and to keep complex, multistage projects on track. To set expectations. Deadlines make clear what we're expected to deliver and when. This means that we can take control of our work, free of confusion.
Having deadlines and meeting them can be an effective way to make sure you achieve your long and short-term goals. Regardless of their nature, deadlines can have a direct influence on your future plans. Being able to meet a deadline is an important trait, but it takes discipline and determination. ~ Teacher QUENNY^^
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The deadline means the time when we have to finish our work, project or assignment.
>> The deadline means the time when we have to finish our work, project, or assignment.(CORRECT) 
I was accustomed to use the word, "deadline", without thinking. But doing homework, i realize that "deadline" is the compound word which is "dead" + "line". It was kind of creepy word for me.
>> I was accustomed to using the word, "deadline", without thinking. But doing homework, I realize that "deadline" is the compound word that is "dead" + "line". It was a kind of creepy word for me.

I'm usually good at meeting the deadline when i have a project but there is one story i missed the deadline.
When i worked co-worker asked me to finish the project by this week. However, I totally forgot about it so he asked me "Are you done? when can i get the project you did?" at times, I remembered that. I didn't tell him that i forgot about it instead i tried to do the project quickly and roughly. Anyway, I gave it to him on Friday evening so i thought i escape the danger of missing the deadline.
>>I'm usually good at meeting the deadline when I have a project but there is one story I missed the deadline.
When I was at work, a co-worker asked me to finish the project by this week. However, I totally forgot about it so he asked me "Are you done? when can I get the project you did?" he said that time.  Then I remembered that I have a project to finish. But I didn't tell him that I forgot about it instead I tried to do the project quickly and roughly. Anyway, I gave it to him on Friday evening so I thought I escaped the danger of missing the deadline.
However, next Monday, he told me you need to do it again. He probably noti
>>However, the next Monday, he told me that you need to do it again. He probably noticed that I forgot the deadline and I finished the work quickly.
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The deadline means the time when we have to finish our work, project or assignment.
I was accustomed to use the word, "deadline", without thinking. But doing homework, i realize that "deadline" is the compound word which is "dead" + "line". It was kind of creepy word for me.

I'm usually good at meeting the deadline when i have a project but there is one story i missed the deadline.
When i worked co-worker asked me to finish the project by this week. However, I totally forgot about it so he asked me "Are you done? when can i get the project you did?" at times, I remembered that. I didn't tell him that i forgot about it instead i tried to do the project quickly and roughly. Anyway, I gave it to him on Friday evening so i thought i escape the danger of missing the deadline.

However, next Monday, he told me you need to do it again. He probably noti
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