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I am not sure the death pealty is the best.

But it is true that human is not absolutely good existence.

So we need law and social order.

If someone break these rules and threaten others, they are punished by justice.

Whether by firing squad, hanging or lethal injection.

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Hi, Ms. Lily!
I agree with your point that humans need laws to follow and to have peace and order in society. Only those who did extreme crimes  deserve this kind of punishment.
Have a happy weekend!
Aki~

I am not sure the death pealty is the best.
>>> I am not sure whether the death penalty is the best punishment.

But it is true that human is not absolutely good existence.
>>> But it is true that human is not absolutely good in existence.

So we need law and social order.
>>> CORRECT!

If someone break these rules and threaten others, they are punished by justice.
>>> If someone breaks these rules and threatens others, they are punished by justice.
 
Whether by firing squad, hanging, or lethal injection.
>>> CORRECT!
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