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What are the possible benefits of working on weekends?

The first and the foremost benefit is some extra money that I get beside when I earn on weekdays.
However, I would rather choose not to work on weekens because I want to be rich, and for me, the rich means "Someone who has time on his hands"

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Hey, U Seung! 

I don't really like working on weekends but I believe havving two additional working days can grant you greater flexibility regarding your work schedule. Another benefit is that you might allocate some working hours to the weekend to make time for other responsibilities during the week. What do you think?

- Kristine ^^ 

The first and the foremost benefit is some extra money that I get beside when I earn on weekdays.
>> The first and foremost benefit of working on weekend is getting additional pay besides my salary.
However, I would rather choose not to work on weekens because I want to be rich, and for me, the rich means "Someone who has time on his hands"
>> However, I would rather choose not to work on weekends because I want to be rich, and for me, being rich means "Someone who has time on his hands".
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