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How can I deal with the mistakes

작성자: 김*영
2023-04-05 2169

회원님의 영작문

Before when i made a mistake, I used to get stressful easily.
However, someone told me nobody can be perfect so it is natural to make a mistake if you are a human being.
So, i changed my mind. When i made a mistake, I would admit the fact and try not to repeat same mistake again. Therefore, I could be generous any situation and control the stress.

I tend to be in hurry and rush sometimes. Whenever I did, i made a mistake easily.
So, I have ruined the project at work before. After this experience, I realize that i need to fix my tendency being in hurry.
I tried to check every project meticulously which means that i usually double-check all projects. So, I could reduce the probability of mistakes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ellen, 
Mistakes help us to clarify things in our life. Whenever we do mistakes, our mind always tells us that we need to “fix it”. This kind of clarification is required for us to grow and learn from our mistakes. This also helps us to understand what we are doing wrong and how we can improve it to help ourselves be better. And most, if not all, of your mistakes, can be excellent learning opportunities. In fact, learning from failure is often the key to success. By getting things wrong, you'll improve your skills and grow in various ways. If you're learning, you won't go wrong. ~ Teacher QUENNY^^

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Before when i made a mistake, I used to get stressful easily.
>> Before when I made a mistake, I used to get easily stressed. 
However, someone told me nobody can be perfect so it is natural to make a mistake if you are a human being.
>> However, someone told me nobody's perfect so it is natural to make a mistake if you are a human being.
So, i changed my mind. When i made a mistake, I would admit the fact and try not to repeat same mistake again. Therefore, I could be generous any situation and control the stress.
>> So, I changed my mind. When I made a mistake, I would admit the fact and try not to repeat the same mistake again. Therefore, I could be generous in any situation and control my stress.
I tend to be in hurry and rush sometimes. Whenever I did, i made a mistake easily.
>> I tend to be in hurry and rush sometimes so whenever I'm like that I easily make a mistake. 
So, I have ruined the project at work before. After this experience, I realize that i need to fix my tendency being in hurry.
>> So, I have ruined a project at work before. After this experience, I realize that I need to fix my tendency to be in hurry.
I tried to check every project meticulously which means that i usually double-check all projects. So, I could reduce the probability of mistakes.
>> I tried to check every project meticulously which means that I usually double-check all projects. So, I could reduce the probability of mistakes.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Before when i made a mistake, I used to get stressful easily.
However, someone told me nobody can be perfect so it is natural to make a mistake if you are a human being.
So, i changed my mind. When i made a mistake, I would admit the fact and try not to repeat same mistake again. Therefore, I could be generous any situation and control the stress.

I tend to be in hurry and rush sometimes. Whenever I did, i made a mistake easily.
So, I have ruined the project at work before. After this experience, I realize that i need to fix my tendency being in hurry.
I tried to check every project meticulously which means that i usually double-check all projects. So, I could reduce the probability of mistakes.





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