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When you visit a new city, which places do you go to first?

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Uhmmmm, I want to visit a lot of places like Vancouver, LA, New York, Berlin, London, Paris, Manila and etc. But, the best place that I want to visit is a Canada. There's a aurora light that's why I want to go there first, I really really want to see that even if I don't have a girlfriend. I guess I have few chances to see that in my whole life.

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Wonderful day to you, Elic! Utilize every moment to prepare your mind and body for future endeavors. Succeeding in life is easy as long as you believe in yourself. Trust yourself, and success will come along.

Uhmmmm, I want to visit a lot of places like Vancouver, LA, New York, Berlin, London, Paris, Manila and etc.
>>> CORRECT.

 But, the best place that I want to visit is a Canada.
>>> CORRECT.

There's a aurora light that's why I want to go there first, I really really want to see that even if I don't have a girlfriend.
>>> CORRECT.

I guess I have few chances to see that in my whole life.
>>> I guess I have had few chances to see that in my whole life.
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