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Q: Is it hard for you to keep a secret? Why or Why not?
A: I think it's the easiest thing in the world for me.
Actually, for other people, it could be hard because secret is just the thing that me and the person who told me the secret know.
But I think it's not that hard because I just need to say nothing to keep the secret.

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Happy Monday, Paul! It's good to read your answer regarding your homework. You did great in expressing your thoughts about the topic. Keep it up! ^^
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A: I think it's the easiest thing in the world for me.
Actually, for other people, it could be hard because secret is just the thing that me and the person who told me the secret know.
But I think it's not that hard because I just need to say nothing to keep the secret.
>> A: I think it's the easiest thing in the world for me. Actually, for other people, it could be hard because secret is just the thing that me and the person who told me the secret know. But I think it's not that hard because I just need to say nothing to keep the secret.
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