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Name one skill that you\'d like to learn or try in 2023.

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I want to learn how to play the guitar in 2023. I have a guitar, so if I learn how to play it, I will be able to play it well. However, when playing the guita, there is a problem about sound. So, I should learn it at a soundproof place.

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Good evening, Seon U! ^-^

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework.

It's good to try something new from time to time. It'll help you learn more about yourself and discover new skills and talents.

I will see you again tomorrow!

__T. Mayleen :)


I want to learn how to play the guitar in 2023.
>>> CORRECT
I have a guitar, so if I learn how to play it, I will be able to play it well.
>>> CORRECT
However, when playing the guita, there is a problem about sound. So, I should learn it at a soundproof place.
>>> However, when playing the guitar, there is a problem with sound. Thus, I should learn it in a soundproof place.
>>> OR: However, there is a sound issue when playing the guitar. I should thus study it in a quiet location.
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