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I think if parents use social media l, their relationship will be good.
But if they use it surveillance their relationship will not good.
Sociality is changing. So the trend is changing everyday. If parents want to communicate with their child, it is good way to use social media.
But it is not good for stocking.

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Thank you for your homework, Ye Lim!

Practice makes progress. Keep it up!

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I think if parents use social media l, their relationship will be good.

>>I think if parents use social media, their relationship with their children will be good.
But if they use it surveillance their relationship will not good.

>>But if they use it for surveillance, their relationship will not be good.
Sociality is changing. 

>>Correct

So the trend is changing everyday.

>>Correct.

 If parents want to communicate with their child, it is good way to use social media.

>>If parents want to communicate with their child, it is a good way to use social media.
But it is not good for stocking.

>>But it is not good for stalking.

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