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Actually, we use to play quietly from we were students. We can talk for 10 hours on 1 place. Our topic are how cute are cats and when we were students, the life things, the resent condition, each other's dream, the future etc. Sometimes, We go to the movie or a little drink and keep talking. More and more. I love that all.

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Actually, we use to play quietly from we were students. 
>> Actually, we used to play quietly from we were students. 
We can talk for 10 hours on 1 place. 
>> We can talk for 10 hours in one place. [ use numbers if it's more than two. :) ]
Our topic are how cute are cats and when we were students, the life things, the resent condition, each other's dream, the future etc. 
>> Our topics are: how cute cats areand when we were students, the things in life, the resent condition, each other's dream, the future, etc. 
Sometimes, We go to the movie or a little drink and keep talking. 
>> Sometimes, we go to the movies or go for a little drink and keep talking. 
More and more. 
>> We talk about a lot of things, and more.
I love that all.
>> CORRECT!

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