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Do you usually cook for your loved ones? Why or why not?

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Yes I usaually cook pasta which my favorite foods. There are several reasons and examples as follows.

Most of all, I can make enough pastas fill my stomach. When I eat out pasta, one serving is sometimes too small. There are my favorite italian cusine in Seoul. When I often visit the restaurant with my husband, we order more thatn three servings. As a result, we have to pay too much.

Also, I can cook to my taste. I don't like sweat and condiments but most Italian restaurants in Korea have sweet pasta and taste like condiments. Near my house or office, there are many italian cusine but it has been modified to suit the taste of the Korean public. I want to feel the fresh taste of tomatoes and olive oile, but most of the pasta sold in restaurants is sweet and I can't feel the taste of the ingredients well.

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Thank you for your homework, Jessica!

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Yes I usaually cook pasta which my favorite foods. 

>>Yes, I usually cook pasta which is my favorite food.

There are several reasons and examples as follows.

>>Correct

Most of all, I can make enough pastas fill my stomach.
>>Most of all, I can make enough pastas to fill my stomach.
 When I eat out pasta, one serving is sometimes too small. 
>>When I eat out and have pasta, one serving is sometimes too small for me.
There are my favorite italian cusine in Seoul. 
>>There are Italian cuisines that I like most in Seoul.
When I often visit the restaurant with my husband, we order more thatn three servings.
>>When I often visit the restaurant with my husband, we order more than three servings.
 As a result, we have to pay too much.
>>Correct.
Also, I can cook to my taste.
>>Correct
 I don't like sweat and condiments but most Italian restaurants in Korea have sweet pasta and taste like condiments. 
>>I don't like sweet and too much condiments but most Italian restaurants in Korea have sweet pasta and it tastes more like condiments.
Near my house or office, there are many italian cusine but it has been modified to suit the taste of the Korean public.
>>Near my house or office, there are many Italian cuisines but it has been modified to suit the taste of the Korean people.
 I want to feel the fresh taste of tomatoes and olive oile, but most of the pasta sold in restaurants is sweet and I can't feel the taste of the ingredients well.
>>I want to feel the fresh taste of tomatoes and olive oil but most of the pastas sold in restaurants are sweet and I can't feel the taste of the ingredients well.
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