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Just as architects plan, design, and build their own buildings, such sentences seem to have been derived from the similarity of planning, designing, and practicing the future when we see life as a building. In my life, all situations and events happen only by my choice. Even if it's a choice made by someone else's coercion, that choice is also my choice. Therefore, we should be careful about the choice of the moment, Otherwise, it could be a precarious life a poorly constructed building.

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Good evening, Jin Yeong! ^-^

Taking control of your future doesn't guarantee that you'll become wealthy, well-known, or the next Steve Jobs or Orpah. It entails making thoughtful decisions, giving up the notion that you have complete control, altering what you can, and accepting what you cannot.

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I will see you again tomorrow. Have a good night!

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Just as architects plan, design, and build their own buildings, such sentences seem to have been derived from the similarity of planning, designing, and practicing the future when we see life as a building.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Such statements appear to have been inspired by the connection between planning, designing, and practicing the future when we think of life as a building, much as architects plan, design, and construct their own structures.
In my life, all situations and events happen only by my choice.
>>> In my life, all situations and events happen only by choice.
Even if it's a choice made by someone else's coercion, that choice is also my choice.
>>> Even if someone else made the decision under duress, it is still my choice.
Therefore, we should be careful about the choice of the moment, Otherwise, it could be a precarious life a poorly constructed building.
>>> Therefore, we should be careful about the choice of the moment. Otherwise, it could be a precarious life in a poorly constructed building.
>>> OR: As a result, we should exercise caution while selecting the appropriate moment. If not, it may be a dangerous existence in a shoddy structure.
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