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How could art be appreciated and enjoyed by more people
>>> If there are more art festival or contest in the schools or universities, art can be appreciated by more people. Since they want to be good in festival or contest, they work and research hard about art, and they can be interested in art more.

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Awesome Day, Steve!
I appreciate your diligence in conveying your thoughts through writing. Keep it up and good job for creating longer sentences.
Enjoy the day!
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If there are more art festival or contest in the schools or universities, art can be appreciated by more people. 
>> If there are more art festivals or contests in schools or universities, art can be appreciated by more people. 

Since they want to be good in festival or contest, they work and research hard about art, and they can be interested in art more.
>>> Since they want to be good in festivals or contests, they work and research well about art, and they can be interested in art more.
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