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Do parents treat all their kids the same way, or do they treat the oldest and youngest differently?

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Many parents treat the oldest and youngest people differently. It's because Korean people think the oldest people are more important than the youngest people. And I got education that we have to treat politely to the oldest people. And I don't think this culture is not strange.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for writing an essay regarding this topic. 
It's true that parents treat their older children and younger children differently. 
Most of the time, the older children are favored but they are given more responsibilities. On the other hand, the younger children are treated like babies in the family because they are "fragile". 
I'm a middle child so I haven't experienced both. LOL. 
Anyhow, I hope your evening is going great. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Many parents treat the oldest and youngest people differently. 
>> Many parents treat their oldest and youngest children differently.
It's because Korean people think the oldest people are more important than the youngest people. 
>> It's because Korean people think the oldest children are more important than the youngest children. 
And I got education that we have to treat politely to the oldest people. 
>> In addition, I was also taught to treat older people politely. 
And I don't think this culture is not strange.
>> So, I don't think this culture is strange.
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