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How do you prepare for an important examination?

작성자: 김*원
2023-05-17 2401

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In the whole life, so many important examinations for me. Among them especially nursing license was very important. When I was grade 4 in the university, I was prepared graduation test. By studying graduation test, very helpful for nursing license exam. After I was passed graduation exam, the prepare of the nursing license was begun in earnest immediately. But I was studying in the home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus. So, I decided to study at the study room. After my concentration was improved a little bit. and then, when I prepare for important examination, I go to the study room or library. These places can concentrate for me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Hyo Won!

In the whole life, so many important examinations for me. 
>>> In my whole life, there has been so many important examinations for me.   
Among them especially nursing license was very important. 
>>Among them, the nursing license exam was especially very important.   
When I was grade 4 in the university, I was prepared graduation test. 
>>>  When I was in the forth year of university, I was preparing for my graduation test. 
By studying graduation test, very helpful for nursing license exam. 
>>> Studying for the graduation test was very helpful for the nursing license exam.  
After I was passed graduation exam, the prepare of the nursing license was begun in earnest immediately. 
>>After I was passed graduation exam, the preparation for the nursing license earnestly began immediately.   
But I was studying in the home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus. 
>>>  But I was studying at home, my concentration was not good compared to study in the campus. 
So, I decided to study at the study room.
>>> correct  
After my concentration was improved a little bit. and then, when I prepare for important examination, I go to the study room or library. 
>>>  After that, my concentration was improved a little bit. And whenever I prepare for an important examination, I go to the study room or library.  
These places can concentrate for me.
>>>  These places can help concentration for me. 

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