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Q: What do you think motivates people to become YouTubers and create content for the platform?
A: I think for the professional YouTubers, usually they do it for the money.
For them, it's the work, so they usually just do that for the money that they should earn.
And for some other YouTubers, they create content to share information.

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Happy Tuesday, Paul! Great work on your homework. You did ell in expressing your thoughts about it! Keep it up! ^^
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A: I think for the professional YouTubers, usually they do it for the money. For them, it's the work, so they usually just do that for the money that they should earn. And for some other YouTubers, they create content to share information.
>> I think professional YouTubers, usually do it for the money. For them, it's the work, so they usually just do that for the money that they should earn. And some other YouTubers, create content to share information.
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