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Many thanks, teacher Jenny! Your class also help me to start my day bright and energetic!

1. I have prepared the report. -> The report has been prepared by me.
2. My father built this house. -> This house was built by my father.
3. The children drank the soup. -> The soup was drunk by the children.
4. He rang the door bell. -> The door bell was rung by him.
5. She won the first prize. -> The first prize was won by her.
6. I am drafting the report. -> The report is being drafted by me.
7. They are digging a well in their backyard. -> A well in their backyard is being dug by them.
8. They congratulated the winners. -> The winners were congratulated by them.
9. The critics praised her performance. -> Her performance was praised by the critics.
10. They took the injured to the hospital. -> The injured was taken to the hospital by them.

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Hello Yu Jin!!!!

It's nice to hear that you're having a great time during our class. Stay young and beautiful with God's light in your heart.
On the other hand, I want to commend you for answering our homework. Please, check and remember the necessary corrections that I've made, so that you'll not make the same mistake again.

T, Jeny

Many thanks, teacher Jenny! 
>>correct
Your class also help me to start my day bright and energetic!
>>correct
1. I have prepared the report. -> The report has been prepared by me.
>>correct
2. My father built this house. -> This house was built by my father.
>>correct
3. The children drank the soup. -> The soup was drunk by the children.
>>correct
4. He rang the door bell. -> The door bell was rung by him.
>>correct
5. She won the first prize. -> The first prize was won by her.
>>correct
6. I am drafting the report. -> The report is being drafted by me.
>>correct
7. They are digging a well in their backyard. -> A well in their backyard is being dug by them.
>>A well is being dug in their backyard.
8. They congratulated the winners. -> The winners were congratulated by them.
>>correct
9. The critics praised her performance. -> Her performance was praised by the critics.
>>correct
10. They took the injured to the hospital. -> The injured was taken to the hospital by them.
>>The injured were taken to the hospital.
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